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The Silver Eagle Part II

by J. Allen Wilson — Read all 1,629 poems by J. Allen Wilson

The Journey Continues

Monday, September 12, 2005

The Silver Eagle Part II


 


....Oh yes, on my way, but on my way to where? The ticket in my jacket had Flagstaff, Arizona stamped in red ink across the face of it, but why Flagstaff? I knew of no one there, nor did I have a job there awaiting me. I just knew that I had to get away from the broken dreams of Atlanta. Too much hurt, too much pain here, yes, at last I am on my way.


 


The sound of rubber clapped in a hypnotic song on the old tar and concrete Georgia roads. The soft bump da bump lulled me into at state of contentment as I sat alone at the back of the bus. Starring out the window, I watched as the cityscape gradually morphed into dark brown fields of soybean, broken only by the occasional rundown clapboard barn. A mother with unruly children sat at the front of the bus and busied herself with newsstand copy of ladies journal, an old man that smelled of day old gin slept across the aisle from me. I reached in my pocket, pulled out a pack of smokes, and fired one up. I watched as the smoke twisted upward like a white serpent, crawling ever upward and then vanishing somewhere above the luggage rack. I leaned back in my seat and finished off the smoke. Returning my gaze back out the window, I noticed the sun setting behind a grove of pine trees. The sky became a kaleidoscope of colors as the large red sun winked from sight. I sighed softly, the old man with the smell of day old gin stirred, and I dropped off to sleep, succumbing at last to the constant bump da bump of an old Georgia Highway.


 


 


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Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on November 6, 2005
Allen This Siliver Eagle story is absolutely wonderufl really keeps me gripped to the story and wonder what the next part will be I can hardly wait till you get this whole book finished it wiil be a top seller for sure. the smells and the sights ans sounds as you write them in here I'm right on that bus smelling seeing all sights and sounds. wonderful story Allen absolutely Wonderful!
tracey xoox(c :)42

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2005
Great capture of the experience of a bus ride! It is amazing how we do sleep when on the road :-) Looking forward to the next one.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on September 13, 2005
I hope there's a Part III, and I'm so sorry for the pain that found you in Atlanta, though I suppose it might have found you anywhere. The story form comes natural for you... Dawn

Reviewed on September 13, 2005
I'm glad that the bus-ride had done you justice and gave you good inspirations to write. This could be a lead to begin telling a great story from your memories.

Very interesting indeed!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 13, 2005
It is getting to be an interesting story and your use of the poetry format instead of short story is also unigue yet it seems to blend into either category as it reads so easily.

Felix

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 12, 2005
Sounds like you ought to report that highway to the Georgia state DOT...;) Ed (this kept my attention, Al, it was enjoyable and easily imagined...a kinda interesting read, though I will have to read all of this story as time and your bus trip wears on...)


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