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When Dreams Were Castles

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Sunday, June 17, 2007

When Dreams Were Castles


 


You dreamed a hundred castles, you dreamed of finer things.


You held out against all odds and found the joy that true love brings.


Yet long before when dreams were castles and you cried a million nights.


You watched with a virgin heart as hope mounted on wings and took flight.


 


You stood beneath the mighty gates with the hurtful tears streaming down.


You felt of a gentle life cheated as the tears of your soul hit the ground.


Alone in the coldness of the shadows of your pain, you looked up and softly prayed.


You begged no longer of castles, nor of finer things, but only, only for the darkness to roll away.


 


A thousand days in bitters pain you wept; a hundred times you died.


You sought only absolution from the hundred castles that filled your mind.


Silence soon became you as you walked barefoot across the crystal sea.


Joy soon unspeakable consumed you when your eyes beheld the parting of the clouds and a man that hung upon a tree.


 


Two thousand years, the eclipsing of a single day.


The imparting of this truth led to the finding of your way.


So whereunto should this dream recede that met the sum of your need?


Should not it be when dreams were castles and when you found true love at the foot of that old rugged tree?


 


J. Allen Wilson © 2007


 


 


 



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Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins
Reviewed on June 18, 2007
Louisa

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on June 18, 2007
J. Allen, this is a wonderful inspiration write! I enjoyed every line.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on June 18, 2007
very enjoyable read,

thanks,
dan

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on June 18, 2007
I like the message included within these lines...e

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 18, 2007
Quite an inspirational piece, my friend.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on June 18, 2007
enjoyed the read

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 17, 2007
Allen, you inspire the heart and uplift the soul with the beauty of this haunting poem!

ET

Reviewed by Patricia Bankhead (Reader)
Reviewed on June 17, 2007
Beautiful poem with a wonderful message within. Thanks for sharing. God bless you,
Patricia

Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor
Reviewed on June 17, 2007
AMEN! Masterfully done, Allen


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