Blinking Before “Echo”
One slip
One failed goodbye.
Gone forever
in the blink of an eye.
Doesn’t matter,
Never really did.
For Un-Lasting is the last gasp
just before they slam the lid.
No flowers, no silly dreams
Just silence; dark silence
filled with inward screams.
Days afore rush the closing mind.
The hours; the minutes crashing
days no more; absence of time.
One slip
One failed goodbye.
No one notices
Few even care.
For “Narcissus” surrenders in his mind
“Echo” laughs now on reflections dried.
Nevermore to himself is he now to preen.
for lasting is the guilt to compensate the dream.
“Echo” fades; she smiles…one slip, one blink….now he dies.
J. Allen Wilson © 2/2008
Love and blessings to you and Leah!
Susan
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
but narcissus was too outward, which one would think might be good, except he failed to SEE:: others in any form/shape/meaning. ..
and death will only reverberate in our souls, leaving us looking at what should have been unless we do [for the least of these]. ..
waiting for those daffodils in the spring; a resurrection of something along the banks of hope
[oh dear rambled again]
this piece is so perfect in allegory and ties. . . triumphant and tried...
masterful ~
ness
Peace,
Dan