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When Dreams Were Castles

by J. Allen Wilson — Read all 1,629 poems by J. Allen Wilson

An old one culled from the past...

Wednesday, May 7, 2008


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When Dreams Were Castles

 

You dreamed a hundred castles, you dreamed of finer things.

You held out against all odds and found the joy that true love brings.

Yet long before when dreams were castles and you cried a million nights.

You watched with a virgin heart as hope mounted on wings and took flight.

 

You stood beneath the mighty gates with the hurtful tears streaming down.

You felt of a gentle life cheated as the tears of your soul hit the ground.

Alone in the coldness of the shadows of your pain, you looked up and softly prayed.

You begged no longer of castles, nor of finer things, but only, only for the darkness to roll away.


A thousand days in bitters pain you wept; a hundred times you died.

You sought only absolution from the hundred castles that filled your mind.

Silence soon became you as you walked barefoot across the crystal sea.

Joy soon unspeakable consumed you when your eyes beheld the parting of the clouds and a man that hung upon a tree.

 

Two thousand years, the eclipsing of a single day.

The imparting of this truth led to the finding of your way.

So whereunto should this dream recede that met the sum of your need?

Should not it be when dreams were castles and when you found true love at the foot of that old rugged tree?

 

J. Allen Wilson © 2007

 



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Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
Spiritual writing filled with so much wisdom. Beautiful verse.

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
This is a keeper, tis absolutely magnificent work, and totally inspirational, God bless you abundantly my friend tyxxx Ch'erie

Reviewed on May 7, 2008
J., enjoyed very much spiritually engrossing.
Wonderful rhythm, rhyme and most of all interpretation.
Thank you for sharing and hope you are enjoying your days.

Sincerely,
~Gwendolyn


Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 7, 2008
When I dream of castles I dream of them in battles...e

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on May 7, 2008
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!! GOLDEN WORDS!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva


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