~Excellent poem, my friend..
I hope all is not forsaken in
your world.:( I feel the same
at times...but we have to be
strong and not be swayed by
the howling winds that come.

Hugggs, *Linda*

EXCELLENT WRITE!!!!

Some days are like this :(






What does it matter?



for the end of it is still the same,



there is neither rhyme nor reason



to this misaligned game.







I am heavy with dismay,



for I have viewed life’s final chapter



in an entirely different way.



I compared it to the past,



Yet still it has no reason,



For there are no victories here,



only defeat,







for when all is written



and the dark angel calls



another journey begins,



Then you realize it was all for naught.



All of life’s struggles



and the strife taken
can be summed in one word…
Forsaken.

No! No! No! I will not have it..there 's reason to this game..LOVE!!!! Just have a look around you..we all love ya at AD..now don't we? :)

Vesna :)

Some days Allen, I feel the same,
More days I have better thoughts,
But when it comes down to it,
I hope I wont feel that way even just a bit.
Peace, Ed & Rufuz

Great write!

Allen, please write to me. I do not
understand word usage of "forsaken".
Will be up all night I think. Poem is good.

Your sounding like me tonight Allen!;-) Wonderful expression of the sentiment, fine writing!

I know this of which you speak. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love, peace, and strength, Regis.

I love it !! Yes it is all forsaken, nd ever will be, I guess, smiles, It is true though, s Emerson stated, and I take it he was right, that in the end it is, seems, that our tendress moments of joy and quainted victory flee us past, while the vice seems to stay, linger, and also sprout, yet the vision in part, and the knowlege also, thanks, al, something that had to be said