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Hole In The Roof

by J. Allen Wilson — Read all 1,629 poems by J. Allen Wilson

Hello everyone, I will be taking a few days away to handle some personal issues. I want to thank everyone who has been supportive of me and has taken the time to comment on my poetry. I must tell you, it means a lot to me. I look forward to being back soon and reading more of your great works. Thank you authors den.
Allen

Monday, February 16, 2004

 


A hole to the sky, through my roof I did spy,


That opened up to me a world of dreams.


For the stars of night, through that hole did peek,


And with their offerings of better days they did speak.


 


They spoke of things that were unnatural and that I did not understand,


For in the world in which I live, there is no love for your fellow man.


They told me that in the days to come, that peace and love would take a stand,


And that to love thy neighbor would be more than some left over archaic command.


 


Yet I dismissed these things with a simple wave of my hand,


And pulled the tattered and worn blanket higher above my head,


For in my world with holes in the roof, it is the cold I cannot stand.


 


Then came the approaching sun, that chased away the darkness of my night,


And through the hole above my head, I felt the warmth from its penetrating light.


Lowering the blanket ever so slowly now from over my head,


I paused to ponder dreams and things and what the stars had said.


 


Could it be true of what they had said, that someday love and peace would rule?


Or was it just a hopeful dream, that I in my poverties scream just want to be true ,


Can it be, in this world of kings, that they could care if I have shelter and food?


Or was it just another pipe dream swirling in my head, as I lay shivering from the cold, and almost dead.


Yes, shivering from the cold …


and staring at the hole in the roof.


 


Waiting,


Wanting


Final


Proof.


 

J. Allen Wilson © 2004


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Reviewed by Sandy Knauer
Reviewed on February 17, 2004
We must make it happen ;-)

I wish you the best of luck and a speedy return.

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on February 16, 2004
I will miss your magic pen while
you take a break from Ad. I hope all
is well with you, kind friend.
Awesome write. Another for my library.

Your friend, *Linda*

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 16, 2004
Keep dreaming and believing and it will happen :-) Great write!

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 16, 2004
thisis a top notch write Allen, of everything you've written I 've loved this the best, al

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on February 16, 2004
It will be so, J. Allen...believe it.

We can't trust governments to carry it out, but
God will, and sooner than any of us expect, I imagine.
HIS promises I trust.

Reviewed on February 16, 2004
This was excellent, very deep,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on February 16, 2004
good write but i'm still afraid of that final proof....of anything

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on February 16, 2004
Much depth in this write. Be well and hurry back.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 16, 2004
This is wonderful Allen. Your writing is always so enlightening. I shall miss it. Take care enjoy, and come back soon!;-)

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 16, 2004
Al, enjoy your few days off, hopefully you repair that hole or the rain may get to your brain & create all sort of strain...I am feeling this night rather like I may not come home, from my drive at work, but Premonitions I don't get, so not to worry...simply must say that this rendering is as deep as most of yours, may take some time to decipher the full meaning, but for now, as always, an excellent rendering/post...Peace thru Writing...Ed & Rufuz


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