Especially for Karla and Karen, and anyone else melting in the heatwave. (I told you ours wouldn't last long!) I wish I could send some of this lovely breeze your way.
Silver Birch swaying
Gentle cooling breeze ripples
through open window
playfully blowing my hair
and refreshing on my skin
Jackie S Brooks (c) 7 August 2003
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Reviews of "A Cooling Tanka"
Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 10, 2003
Thank God those trees can get breezes going! :)
Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
blow some my way Jackie, I got both fans blowing and I still cant keep cool. Why does it have to be so humid! They say this will last for as long as they can see.....I am hibernating I think and be out in the Autumn.
A Lovely flowing tanka.
A Lovely flowing tanka.
good write
john+