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Santa's Grotto
by Jackie S Brooks → (All Poetry by Jackie S Brooks)
  
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The memory of the little girl has haunted us for the last three Christmas's.


Santa’s Grotto


Peep into the Grotto
what can you see?
Is that Santa there
behind that twinkling tree?


He’s waiting for you
to give him your list,
Of the presents you’d like
is there anything you’ve missed


Playstation for some
or a bike for big brother.
A baby doll for your sister,
she wants to play mother.


Some ask for so much
others ask for a surprise,
And a little one, over-awed
in Momma’s arms cries.


A ten year old girl
comes to visit Santa alone.
Her request tugs at the heart,
sends a chill to the bone.


She is sad eyed and solemn
holding some secret inside,
As she tells Santa her wish,
a hearts desire that should not be denied.


All that she asks for
"A Happy Christmas please."
Of all the many requests
Santa feels his heart squeeze,


For this child he prays
for a Christmas enchanted,
by Divine Intervention
May her wish soon be granted.


 


Jackie S Brooks (c)
14 December 2003


 


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 Reviews of "Santa's Grotto"
Reviewed by Steve Joos
Reviewed on February 4, 2004
I can understand why the girl's request haunts you so much. A very good job and a though-provoking piece.

Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell
Reviewed on December 29, 2003
Like Jerry, I'm not getting notices that you have posted more of your wonderful poetry but thankfully I visited this morning and found this and your gingerbread poem.....This is very interesting and I'd LOVE to hear more about your "visitor" every year on Christmas. Well done Jackie!

Reviewed on December 28, 2003
(((jackie)))

sorry--i somehow missed this :( *tears*

all she wants is a happy christmas...no child should be wishing for this *tears*

beautifully written, heartbreaking write==yes, my heart was squeezed

(((HUGS))) and hope your christmas was happy

love,

karla. :( *and may you have a safe, happy new year*

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on December 26, 2003
This was very well done, Jackie. I'm sorry I'm so late in commenting but something is happening to my automatic alert when you post something. It is happening not only to your website but others as well. Sorry. I really liked this one, you captured the little girl's "secret" very well, leaving us to delve into h=our own hearts to find it. Well done.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 15, 2003
Brilliant write Jackie!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 14, 2003
Really hope she got her 'Happy Christmas,' Jackie. Wonderful write!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 14, 2003
Superb write, a keeper...
Have Some Great Holidays!

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
Reviewed on December 14, 2003
Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant! I love this one.

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
Reviewed on December 14, 2003
"Feels his heart squeeze," as do we all for that little child. Thanks, Jackie.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 14, 2003
beautifully done! heart touching write.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 14, 2003
Delightfully done! Thank you for this touching seasonal offering. Love and peace, Regis.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on December 14, 2003
A wonderful poem with a heart wrenching ending. Good to see you back, Jackie
Merry Christmas to you and I hope you are getting around OK with those new knees
Love
George

Reviewed on December 14, 2003
Wonderful delightful write! I enjoyed this!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)


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