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Ghosts
by E D Detetcheverrie → (All Poetry by E D Detetcheverrie)
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Small and agile,
lightning quick,
weapons ready--
tail-tip flick.
Watch the hunters
scout their prey;
glance at each other,
and silent say,
It is the moment--
the time is right.
They race and leap
swift and light.
The herd is nervous
--they sense there's wrong
--they snort and fidget
terror song.
One's been selected.
One is doomed.
One darts in panic--
a sudden bloom
of coelophysis
through the pack.
They zip and hurdle,
land on his back.
The creature stumbles,
barks in fear.
The herd heads elsewhere--
death is near.
Claws come down.
Teeth traps shut tight.
He thinks to struggle,
he tries to fight.
He is astonished--
villain small--
and then he looks
and sees them all...
Time seems so short
and nature cruel.
The herd is distant.
A crimson pool...
He feels their hunger.
There is no hope.
The pain is numbing--
the world a slope.
The creature's fallen,
his death is close.
Brought down by chance--
by a pack of ghosts.

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 Reviews of "Ghosts"
Reviewed by Mary Quire
Reviewed on April 23, 2005
Very imaginative. The picture you painted with your words was awesomely done.

M.Rose

Reviewed on April 23, 2005
Outstanding, you nailed this one cold, loved it! Powerfully real and so excellent,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on April 23, 2005
I wish I had something brilliant to say about this work, but the work says it all for itself. Well done, excellent cadance and flow.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 22, 2005
There is power in every word in these verses. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on April 19, 2005
Well done!

Reviewed on April 17, 2005
Short, concise language begs the reader to continue; excellent meter and rhyme--delicious shivers are running up and down my spine! LOVE IT!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Victoria Murray
Reviewed on April 17, 2005
Wow! This is an excellent write. Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed it very much.

Happy Writing,

Victoria Taylor Murray


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