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the sun that came
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Someone very special to me just passed…
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the sun that came


 


he flew the supple core of time in a passage
of colours untied from him, and the sun…
… the sun that came and claimed him, its flower.


 


© 2007 Alexandra* ~ OneLight*®




 
 


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Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on August 6, 2007
A beautiful tribute to a wonderful man. I can only hope that I, too, will one day be worthy of being claimed by the sun. The salt of your tears is welcome on my lips.

Beijinhos e abraços,
Teu Joseph

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 5, 2007
A most loving and transcendental eulogy and tribute, Alexandra. Truly passionate and heartfelt. You have delicately captured the soul of this beloved person like a beautiful butterfly... only to let him go again to fly higher, truer, ascending into light. So tranquil. Love the focal point of the repetition of Sun. Surely both he and this shine. Bless you and thank you. Kate xx

Reviewed on August 3, 2007
Alexandra,

(((HUGS))) I'm sorry for your loss. A moving, heartfelt eulogy in succinct lines of perfection.

Love and prayer, Karla.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 3, 2007
He sounds like a wonderful person, and very sorry for your loss, Alexandra.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on August 3, 2007
Alexandra,

My condolences, beautiful poetry my friend.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on August 3, 2007
He will be inside every hue of a rainbow, the sun could never take it away from you, it will just pointed the place in the sky where someone very special is looking down at you.
Georg

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on August 2, 2007
a fitting dirge for a dear friend. Hope you'll find consolation in the fact that he's in a better place. Victor

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on August 2, 2007
very lovely, Alexandra...i'm sorry about your loss of a loved one~

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 2, 2007
Deep and dark but with the aura of light shining from the loss to signify hope. Very well done Alexandra.

Fee

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 2, 2007
sorry for your loss

Wonderful sentiments...

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on August 2, 2007
Beautiful ongoing thought-{all blessings}-love Ted

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 2, 2007
I am sorry for your loss, Alexandria, this is just beautiful . . .


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