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A space
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A space

 

 

A space, more oblong than square, with fine border lines
waiting for a definition between the vagueness of distance
- to be crossed – and the clarity of staying.

 

There is no smell of sea, no rumor of rivers;
but there are birds singing and horses calling
other horses that graze, from time to time
drifting by as naturally as the breeze.

 

There are dogs barking, somewhere, and I’m pretty sure
that there are bees, oblivious to any subtleties of pens
poised above hidden meanings of flowers.

 

Eyes fall upon this blankness in cascade –
and, like globules of some intent much too brief,
visions evaporate and vanish as soon as they touch
the surface, much too hard, much too dry, much too hot.

 

Consumed, this space, by a poem; perhaps a whole story
unseen, unwritten, yet run by and through me like a fever;
this fever, untold, consuming me, today…

 

 

-- © 2008 Alexandra* ~ OneLight*®

 


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Reviewed by James Adair (Reader)
Reviewed on May 6, 2009
I've just read a couple of your poems (with the TV commercials blaring in the background...I know...Terrible!). I had no idea what to expect and read this poem. It took me by surprise, the subject, observations and feelings. I must say you have a unique way of looking at things . I liked being transported to your point of view and also like nature. Even with the interruptions: Very nice. Thank you for sharing! Next time: A silent room and a glass of wine

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on September 16, 2008
Truly nice work...thoughts expelled to consume and thoughts consumed to expel those ever moving emotions of life...

very nice work...

Art sun...

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on September 16, 2008
wow
I like this
.........we are on the same thought pattern, I just posted a poem on this subject.........
it gets ya huh :)
take care, pax A

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 16, 2008
Love the way you capture all the ingrediants that a poet and writer must have and turn them into a recipe for success. Very nice Alexandra
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on September 15, 2008
This is excellent, some of the best I have read on here recently.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on September 15, 2008
Similar to finding the masterpiece in a block of granite eh? The visions that pass before our eyes on the computer screen, as we write, are as multifarious as grains of sand and snowflakes. Your little oblong space is always a treasure. Beautiful thoughts dear heart!
Blessings and love ...
Richard

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 15, 2008
Stunning poetry, Alexandra. This gift is worthy of much more than a single reading. Merci! Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on September 15, 2008
Excellent and a wonderful piece...
"this fever, untold, consuming me, today..."
What a great line!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on September 15, 2008
What a write this is! Alexandra, this was EXCELLENT!!! We never knew a tiny little space would occupy so many things that are invisible to the human eyes, but yet they are there for us to enjoy. You have done wonders with this write!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on September 15, 2008
Personal space is, in fact, our world -- what we sense about us. Beautiful expression of the bubble we live in.
Love and many unspacious {{{{{hugs}}}},
Leland

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 15, 2008
The space for this poem was well used, indeed.

And thanks very much for your comments about our hideous horse slaughter, Alexandra; I know you would call if you could.

Reviewed on September 15, 2008
Alexandra,

Your work astonishes and pleases: this is beautiful. May your space always be filled with love and poetry. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on September 15, 2008
This is a beautiful and very good poem,I enjoy reading it,take care

Edwin


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