Unabridged by constraints..in my quiescent
mind, the very depths of existence...a place
that permeates infinity... surge the tides,
un assumable depths... plunge the ocean
floors, penetrating darkness with my love.
I add my tears to this bottle, and cast it out,
for it is you I seek...quest of solace...love
at peace...absent no more are You to be,
life's evolution of light restored.
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Reviews of "Boundless depth...My Heart, I cast"
Reviewed by Cliff Long (Reader)
Reviewed on April 23, 2011
Your poem portrays a journey of imagination that goes far beyond my own. A glorious fantasy without bounds.
Reviewed by Mike Mirabella (Reader)
Reviewed on April 22, 2011
how beautifully put,your writing stirs what is our basic need.We all cast that bottle out at one time or another.what more can you wish than the bottle be found. Mike
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
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John