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Gazebo the Gateway
by Vivian L Dawson → (All Poetry by Vivian L Dawson)
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Chapel like setting of velvet rose petals.
Sense of heavenly mystery, to pen. But,
paraphrase the words for earthly plight.

Forces of nature...sky blacked out, but
clouded not, as faced, twinkling diamond
stars form the circle for her ring.

Unrelenting inspiration...walk the carpet,
wildest dreams propel the desires of a fiery
red heart. Enrichment lies in the circle round,
steeped with containment for the proposal
of unity.

Romantic is the place setting for two, embrace the
Power of Love from his bended knee...say~I Will.

(c)copyright10November2010vivianldawson

 

 


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 Reviews of "Gazebo the Gateway"
Reviewed by Cliff Long (Reader)
Reviewed on May 29, 2011
I will say the gazebo in the night reminds me of a gazebo on the beach where we shared our thoughts. Do you remember?

Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2011
NO PLACE MORE ROMANTIC...A GAZEBO...LOVE IN BLOOM. ANNA

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 21, 2011
Sounds like a marvelous Gateway.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on May 20, 2011
I like how you juxtapose your images here, Vivian,
drawing the reader this way and that in the best possible way;
a delight to read.

John

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on May 20, 2011
Wow, instantly took me back to my poem "Don't Tell Me You're Not Here." I so well remember every feeling from that gazebo long ago- dreaming love.
It is the perfect place-
Perfect poem Vivian.
John

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on May 20, 2011
Elegantly romantic!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Joy Hale
Reviewed on May 20, 2011
Romantic poetry at its best. The gazebo is such a perfect setting for a proposal, romance or perhaps a stolen kiss in the night. Good write, Vivian. Joy L. Hale

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2011
Very lovely indeed sweet lady...Hugsss

Reviewed by Laura Fall
Reviewed on May 20, 2011
A Lovely write indeed Laura


Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2011
you really are a natural-born poet!! this is excellent. love your work.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2011
I have loved the gazebo since I saw the movie of the same name where a body became buried beneath it.

But this poem isn't sinister and complicated like the movie. This is a well-written, direct appeal to lovers everywhere.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 20, 2011
Nice little spot for a romantic interlude, just as this poem is quite romantic...e


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