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~id~

in control ever
upward
spiraling aspirations
ner
we be just grains
of
sand
toiling in an ebb
tide

(c) id
06October2013
Vivian L Dawson


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 Reviews of "id"
Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on October 10, 2013
Love the picture of the Gaudi sandcastle. Anyone who has stood barefoot in the rollers as they hit the beach will appreciate that idea of the grains of sand toiling in an ebb tide.

Reviewed by J. Roseline
Reviewed on October 9, 2013
Sublime and sensitive,toiling in an ebb tide!!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 8, 2013
We still are in the grand scheme of things, but a great sentiment, nonetheless.

Ron

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 8, 2013
True reflective wisdom via your verses, Vivian. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 8, 2013
We be just grains of sand - how so very true.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on October 8, 2013
that we are
budd

Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2013
wonderful vivian, another hit. anna

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 7, 2013
beautiful scenery lovely words
love & Peace

William

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on October 7, 2013
Just beautiful and the last line closes it all perfectly

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 7, 2013
Oh damn, I thought it said "ed"...though I have written of the id, neat story

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on October 7, 2013
That photo "says" your poem about as well as I have ever seen. No, you are not grains of sand lying loosely on the beach you are reaching for the sky. Fantastic!


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