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Unwinding
by Lakshmi Raj Sharma → (All Poetry by Lakshmi Raj Sharma)
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The last phase of life is very different and challenging

 Unwinding

There comes a time, when you unwind,
Move differently, to the other side.
When your mind is made up, youth left far far behind.
The mind is seized with things of another kind.

The spirit changes and your moods change too.
All that had “happened” is now just spots of time.
The final act before the curtain, to be braved by you.
An act of matchless colour; not just pink or blue.

You’re fighting the last battle, quite alone it is this time.
Your friends of better times are now nowhere near.
It is all a new experience, quite a new paradigm.
To some it is smooth sailing, to others short of crime. 

Preparing for the quittance from this world it is.
One’s uncertain which way the road's to lie.
It’s your last stroke to discover what they call “bliss”.
You either hit a jackpot, or end up with a miss.


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 10, 2014
In the end, we all "miss." But there are ways to wind down that are better than others. One is try to remain healthy, because sickness makes "winding down" much more difficult and drawn out. Keeping an open mind helps when old friends and acquaintances are no longer there. If you can't be with the ones you love, love the one you're with.

Ron

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on July 10, 2014
Lakshmi,

Excellent poem of a life ending and a person's thoughts as they get older. Well, I'm one of those getting older and I thank God He's allowed me a long life. My Mom died at 39yrs old from a drunk driver. She was crossing the road and he hit her and kept driving. So I cherish every moment of life...it could end in an instant. Thank God I know where I'm going.

Love and blessings,
Linda

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on July 10, 2014
Well said in a poetic frame! Keeping so busy that we don't have time to think about getting older keeps us young. Amen my friend.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on July 9, 2014
well done

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on July 9, 2014
I like the football game analogy...
When you're down to the 2-minute drill
And you cram in a life's worth of work and finesse
and end up in a blaze of glory as your cross the goal line,
or not. Either way, you expend it all, and leave nothing on the
field of play.


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