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Walking away
by Denise Edwards → (All Poetry by Denise Edwards)
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I sit here, hoping things will change
but in my heart I know 
they'll remain the same
I put in all that I had,
but it wasn't enough to hold you
I guess  love is only 
what one believe's is true
I know I've  lost you,
and there's nothing else to say
so, I'll  pick up my broken heart
and just walk away

I packed my bags carefully,
putting old memories in  place
pictures of a life that is no more
keepsakes of your loving face

I can't look back now
I must move forward
and face this dreaded day
as I close this page of our lives
and slowly walk away

You've made your choice
and it doesn't include me
I have to let you go
I have to set you free
and walk on out that door
forever closing it behind me.


 

 

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 Reviews of "Walking away"
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
Beautiful, beautiful prose - finely penned!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
I echo the sentiment of Evelyn and Jeff. Jeff's idea sounds good. Love and peace to you, Denise. Regis

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on March 12, 2004
Evelyn read my mind, because Denise, this *IS* a beautiful song! I also have a melody in mind for this one. Sounds like a "song challenge" between me and Evelyn and... anybody else ?? Denise, this just tugs at the heart strings, and is definitely song-worthy! Maybe I'll put the melody on it, record it, give you a link, and see what you think. -- Jeff

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
Reviewed on March 12, 2004
This sounds like a beautiful song. I have a melody in mind,
for it. Great write.


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