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Muddy waters
by Denise Edwards → (All Poetry by Denise Edwards)
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(Sigh!) I've got the blues. Alone again.

Running as the river's flow
misery is hanging over me
trying to get the feeling
that drew me to you, and you to me
trying to be, what we used to be

Love, it is said, heals all wounds
but some wounds fester on
to heal it, takes more than some of us
are willing to give, the reasons
some of us can't condone
but I will never give up
on the idea of love

I grasp for it, fleeting tho' it has been
I keep losing it, even when
I think , "this time I'm gonna win!"
and my muddy waters flow on
yes, they're cloudy and cold 
but they still flow on


Everytime I roll over,
I seem to fall on my head
some days, it's hard to get out of bed
I make a move, and it starts all over again
clouds muddle my view
darkness brings on the pain
but I won't stop my search
for love, I'll never give in
so on, my muddy waters go
stirred by hope, on and on they flow


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 Reviews of "Muddy waters"
Reviewed by Lynn Barry
Reviewed on March 14, 2004
My first novel is entitled, "Puddles"...sometimes life is muddy water...sometimes it is refreshingly clear...nice poem...

Reviewed on March 13, 2004
Excellent write...but time will fix it.

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on March 13, 2004
Oh boy, I feel this one.

Hugs!

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
Reviewed on March 13, 2004
I know the feeling. This poem really flowed beautifully.
Great write. :0)

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on March 13, 2004
I know the feeling, but being alone can be a wonderful time to find yourself...stay positive love will come when it's supposed to. Sad but nicely written...~Z~

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 13, 2004
It will happen :-) Sad write but with a hopeful ending.


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