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These days without you
by Denise Edwards → (All Poetry by Denise Edwards)
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Falling down now
that's all I seem to do

can't seem to pull out of it
since I no longer have you
this loneliness has inprisoned me
it holds me against my will
where is the joy I used to feel?

I wonder, do you hurt as much as I do?
I know you must, if you loved me
as much as I still love you
why are we lonely and  apart?
what reason are we 
breaking each other's heart?

These days without you
I walk around in a daze
I know you must feel this pain,  too
love's revolving door swings both ways

I need the constance of you by my side
the door to my heart is still open
my arms are still open wide
Falling down  again, don't want to fall no more
can't seem to pick my heart up from the floor
so it goes, in my world of blue,
so it goes, these days without you.
 


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 Reviews of "These days without you"
Reviewed by David Delaney
Reviewed on October 21, 2008
Beautiful writing Denise, oh! yes! the painful parting of two souls as only a poet can translate.

Dave.

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on October 16, 2008
This poem reminds me of another, sadder time in my life, eight years ago now. The man was a fool for turning his back on what we had. Apparently he thought soulmates came along everyday. Am I still angry? No, not really. But it makes me sad to remember.

You are at your best with this one. Rebecca

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on October 16, 2008
Outstanding is right...well done sweet lady...Hugs,much love too you

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on July 24, 2004
Feel the pain and anguish in this torturous pen...
Very moving and sad....

Peter Paton

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on May 27, 2004
Achingly beautiful!

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
Reviewed on May 24, 2004
You deserve a standing ovation for this poem, bravo!

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2004
Outstanding poetry, Poet!!! I truly enjoyed the read. Keep The Faith.


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