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Sullied memories
by Denise Edwards → (All Poetry by Denise Edwards)
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Old poem I had forgotten about


Once, we loved so hard
no one could pull us apart
You were my protector
my strong and sturdy wall
with you, I always knew
I would never fall

Years passed and you seem to forget
the time and effort we put into this
my heart has been betrayed
for another woman's kiss

Broken hearted, I am
now that my dreams have been diluted
the pure love we once shared
is now soiled and polluted

You didn't try to resist her attraction
just gave in to the youth
she used as a distraction

I'll let you go now,
go on and be free
one day I'll gain back the trust
your leaving has taken from me


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Reviewed by Richard Orey
Reviewed on November 13, 2008
Trust is at the core of a dedicated and loving relationship. Once broken, trust is never again complete and total. To sustain a rich and rewarding relationship, there is no substitute for trust, for even in lovemaking, trust is the foundation for the sharing of unbridled passions.

In your closing stanza "...one day I'll gain back the trust your leaving has taken from me," it is a given that the trust will be not with "the pure love" you once knew but only with another; and, even then, the experience of a prior lover's trust-breaking will be a haunting memory.

"Sullied Memories" speaks with profound insight.

Well done, Denise. Well done!
Richard

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 20, 2008
Not from him I hope
One Can never trust one
that betrayed you once
Peace be with you
Love & Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 18, 2008
The ability to love someone enough to step aside and realize that if they are not happy with you or on love with you is rare indeed but it is the way real love should be...

Fee

Reviewed by Stuart McCallum
Reviewed on October 17, 2008
Oh Denise,

How I wish he hadn't hurt you by being selfish, weak and unkind. Your heart is much stronger and more beautiful than his, leaving you is sure to be HIS MISS.

Stay strong sweet lady, Stuart from a distant land

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on October 17, 2008
very well written, about love, betrayal and healing...
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"


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