So intensely, she burns With fiery love That I though about Comparing her to a blowtorch
But not just To any old blowtorch But rather, to a gas burner That mixes air and gas together Producing flames Hot enough to melt A steel statue of Hercules
Because when she mixes Her womanly heat And desires together Fiery hot she becomes And blows Her flaming love upon me Causing this Herculean man Who is stronger than steel To softly melt Into her gentle lover man
Your curvaceous, blowtorch Miss looks like she could set many a man's heart aflame! LOL! Nice poem!
Reviewed by Alexandra Riera (Reader)
Reviewed on December 11, 2005
Hi I liked this one very much.. the only think that didn't look too romantic to me was the gas burner... I can't imagine her as some sort of cooker, how about a fire made from wood, that is natural, they go up in flames slowly and have fiery flames too? apart from that it is absolutely beautiful... (my favourite one is Butterflies and Women anyway..)
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This collection of poetry addresses the nature of time, reflections on the natural world, the difficulty of loss,
contemporary social issues and gratitude for life.
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