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Blue
by Ray Malcolm → (All Poetry by Ray Malcolm)
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I haven't written a poem for a ling time, and I never was trained in the art. So here is my sloppy poem for my beloved son.


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Blue is the colour of the sea,

of muted grays and faded jeans.

Like faded skies,

Or deep blue eyes;

yours is the colour of blue.

The velvet mornings

drawn out upon the endless stretch of time

Like paint flaked planks,

They once shined new.

And in this ephemeral dream

I pretend that my strength will make a difference,

But even the strongest crumble,

Like dust,

Like stone,

Like flour blown from the hand.

The Indian spat pigment against the wall,

That rude expression of his inner soul

Leaving behind a pattern

That told nothing,

that told all.

A  falling leaf,

A running game,

Laughter broke the silence,

A stone fell in the pond.

The sun was falling below the horizon,

Trees rustled in a light breeze,

I could spend eternity,

But I don’t have that long.


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 Reviews of "Blue"
Reviewed by Ray Malcolm
Reviewed on March 22, 2012

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 21, 2012
Thanks for joining the crowd of untrained poets. You have provided many wonderful images for your son and wrapped it up nicely in the end.

Ron

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on January 21, 2012
I like this....Love is eternal

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on January 21, 2012
Wow! This is beautiful.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on January 21, 2012
Stunning voice in this ~ really a gem!
I read on your blog you are also a musician :)


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