On an early May morning
but a few days ago. While walking beside a stream
a precious sight I found. All nestled in high green grass
a delicate new fawn.
She lay sleeping peacefully
breath content and rythmic. I stood there smiling broadly
my heart all warm inside. A beautiful fresh new life
hers, but just begining.
I backed away quietly
a peeking tom escaped. No human trace left behind
to complicate her life. A perfect morning saunter
in nature's blissful realm.
EVERY ONCE IN A WHILE...A PERSON WILL BE BLESSED TO FIND...TRUE BEAUTY IN ITS PUREST AND MOST PEACEFUL FORM; ASLEEP. WHAT A GREAT PICTURE AND THANKS FOR SHARING, BUDD. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on June 4, 2012
"On and early May morning/but a few days ago." Great way to hook readers into a story, Budd. The reverence shines in these lines. ~~ Diana
Reviewed by Sandy Hoynacki (Reader)
Reviewed on June 4, 2012
Simply beautiful in every way. You have captured the emotions from inside out.... There's nothing quite like this feeling.
Budd,
Simply and utterly beautiful poetry. To see such a natural scene right before your eyes, is so beautiful. You have a tender heart filled with love.
Wonderful poetry, yet again!
Enchanting! I love the way you revere the fawn. This is a reminder for us to help heal the earth, to walk barefoot in the solitude of nature but not disturb!
Wonderful write, brings to mind a trip I was making one time drving down a highway a young fawn still with spots was in the middle of my lane, I put on my four way flashers and followed behind him flashing other vehicles and acting as a buffer until he finally decided to leave the highway for the woods.
fee
I would have loved to walked upon that sight. I have a friend who lives in Virginia ans she has deer foraging in her front yard and eating all the squirrels food she puts out, plus munching on her flowers.
Regis
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Ron
Anna
Simply and utterly beautiful poetry. To see such a natural scene right before your eyes, is so beautiful. You have a tender heart filled with love.
Wonderful poetry, yet again!
Peace, love and light,
Amber
do not disturb...*Budd* what
a blessing to convey!!!!
Lady Vivian
with us, Budd; this is indeed lovely
john
fee
Lovely Budd
Love and Light
Lily
Love ya!
Jane
Christine