when what was once real becomes a dream...still...better to have loved than... thanks for share...asa
Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on August 14, 2012
I find so much tenderness in your arrangements, Budd. The writing of such a sensitive soul who thinks: "I dare not be the next to call/and thus invade your private time" -- I bet lots of women would like one of those! Just the right length is this poem, to paint the temperament you create here. ~ ~ Diana
A uniquely visual journey of an often experienced action--the driving of a lonely road. I did, however, find myself struggling with the rhythm of the last stanza whose sentiment felt perfect for the ending.
What a beautiful dream Budd, and
gives you time to reflect and recall.
All the things that you hold dear
and keep close to your heart.
Such a lovely romantic vision.
I can see you behind the wheel of your car
driving and seeing these green eyes looking
back to you... "I see your bright green eyes that shine"
Just a wonderful piece!
Love and Light
Lily
Reviewed by Sandy Hoynacki (Reader)
Reviewed on August 10, 2012
Deeply interwoven with sadness, longing and what could have been. You write with élan.. Beautifully penned, Budd.
Sandy
Reviewed by Gert van Weenen (Reader)
Reviewed on August 10, 2012
Beautiful Budd, you must be deeply in love.
Sometimes dreams can come true, especially when you both share the same dreams.
A distance can never be to far, and when your time has come it's never to late
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Heartfelt poetry, Budd. Magical verses.
Many blessings,
+Linda
You are a wonderful writer Budd!
Teresa
*Budd* is surely very gentle!
Lady Vivian
gives you time to reflect and recall.
All the things that you hold dear
and keep close to your heart.
Such a lovely romantic vision.
I can see you behind the wheel of your car
driving and seeing these green eyes looking
back to you... "I see your bright green eyes that shine"
Just a wonderful piece!
Love and Light
Lily
Sandy
Sometimes dreams can come true, especially when you both share the same dreams.
A distance can never be to far, and when your time has come it's never to late
Love ya!
Jane
and feel your lips pressed up to mine
tis but a dream I live this day."
Dreams have a way of touching you and making everything all real, my friend. I so enjoyed this offering.