Youth had passed before they could meet
but then they wondered into each. Sharing a caring never known
now thier shared love is new to both. Talks of the past, stories told
dreams of a future yet to come. They sit holding along the beach
laughing at jokes only they share.
With growing love comes unkown trust
and demons of past start to leave. As trust grows a new seed takes hold
at first untold a passion grows. Later vows of love are exchanged then the two truly become same. Passion tender and sweet loving
closeness seals them into the one.
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Reviews of "Silver Love"
Reviewed by Vonda McDonald (Reader)
Reviewed on June 4, 2013
Give me hope that at this late stage in life I will find love again. Beautiful poem.
A beautiful peek into the lives of two people as they learn of one another, learn to trust each other and ultimately join their lives together. Lovely, sentimental words as "closeness seals them as one."
Joy L. Hale
Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2012
Budd, Without trust there would be no love...a great write!
THE GIFT OF 'SILVER LOVE' DOES NOT HAVE TO WEATHER THE STORMS OF NEGLECT, MALNOURISHMENT AND REJECTION. NO...'SILVER LOVE' COMES COMPLETELY YIELDED, SUBJECTIVE AND FULL OF WISDOM...READY TO BE ENJOYED AND TREASURED AS IT SHOULD BE. WITHOUT THE CLAMOR OF CARELESS MISTAKES AND STUPID HANDLING...IT MESHES, ENTWINES AND BLENDS, SO TENDERLY AND PASSIONATELY, TWO SURRENDERED HEARTS, MINDS, SOULS AND BODIES...INTO ONE. BUDD...YOU ALWAYS LEAD ME DOWN THIS ROAD, BUT ITS ALRIGHT...I ENJOY IT. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Oh, if only it were this simple, and quite, frankly, this beautiful. Stats seem to get worse, however, with far too many willing to dream the dream, but not walk that takes-a-lotta-work-walk. Well done.
Reviewed by Sandy Hoynacki (Reader)
Reviewed on September 9, 2012
Empyreal reading with a deeply woven meaning. You bring romance to the fireplace with unending love in your words. Tender are your images. A unique, well thought out title to match. Beautiful Budd.. Beautiful..
I hope this is factual poetry, Budd, but if it isn't it is still a fantastic told poem. You dug down deep and came up with a wonderful title too. This is a special one, my friend.
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at first untold a passion grows.
I love the depth of meaning in the sentiments expressed via your verses, Budd. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Joy L. Hale
Deborah
Love ever true in the silver of their happiness.
Beautiful Love poetry.
Lady Mary Ann
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Beautiful again Budd
Love ya!
Jane
Awe......closeness seals like glue!
God Bless,
Deb
with your heart showing
and your soul knowing
Lady Vivian
Such lovely views, past demons buried
and visions to be shared as well.
Simply lovely
Love and Light
Lily