Remiss in Love (poem) by Budd Nelson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 15, 2013

Very beautiful work!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 10, 2013

Your words seem very much alive - write on.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on March 10, 2013

But the drudgery of earning bread
and turmoil of healing past lies lived
clouding o'er skies of sunshine ahead
thus remiss i am when words seem dead.

I hear ya!

Vesna :)

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on March 9, 2013

There is a heartbeat in your
poem *Budd* and I felt it!

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on March 9, 2013

if you truly feel that way maybe something is not right...you need to wait.

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on March 9, 2013

all words have creative power & your
words here poeticize your love so wonderfully
& too for us all to tell those we love that we
love them...

Love Is a Trumpet
Shout It Out Loud
Vickie

Reviewed by Gert van Weenen (Reader)

Reviewed on March 9, 2013

Words are never dead Budd.
There comes a day that you will look back and say: h�, I'm standing in the sunshine again and I've left behind everything I've struggled with.

Time ripens all things, heals all things, renews all things
Gerrit

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on March 9, 2013

VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 9, 2013

Powerful words of the lone
outstanding write
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on March 8, 2013

So deeply moving and sure very touching poetry my friend Laura

Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd

Reviewed on March 8, 2013

Still, Budd, we show our affection with what we do for the people we love.

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on March 8, 2013

You sound like you are down. This too shall pass. This poem though sad is probably more theraputic than you think. Chin up, oh, poet!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Isabella Koldras

Reviewed on March 8, 2013

Our "Neanderthal brains" guide (...to often?..) our behaviour,

contemporary "sophisticated human brain" helps to recognize;

"Errare Humanum est", but..........., to read the words of your

...."lament of regrets".....on the International Women Day, have

enriched, and inspired my life!?.....Thank you for sharing.

Salute you! Budd.

Warm regards. Isabella

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron

Reviewed on March 8, 2013

I identify with your last stanza big time, Budd. Unfortunately we gwert so busy trying to make a living that we fail to make a life....those we love suffer abnd are sometimes neglected.

Peace,

ChipB

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on March 8, 2013

~Budd~
Unique your verses that peer into your heart.
All to this will pass. Love will become your skies of sunshine.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on March 8, 2013

Budd, I believe we all go through this, time helps...

Always,

Deborah

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on March 8, 2013

You dug deep within to write this. Everyone has said it better than me, but I liked it, sad tho it was.

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on March 8, 2013

Budd, this is such a good poem...as I read your words I could hear a violin, guitar and mandolin softly playing in the background.
Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Reviewed on March 8, 2013

I agree.. I think this is one of your best... Myrna

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on March 8, 2013

I must agree with our fellow authors, simply excellent indeed. A true masterpiece with no dead words contained within.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 8, 2013

Budd, this is really, really good, I liked this one, perhaps one of the best of yours I have ever read, u can take that as good or bad being I am not the most perfect poet myself...ed

Reviewed by Teresa Walker

Reviewed on March 8, 2013

Your words are definitely not dead!! They hit the heart mark!
I am glad we have new days to enlighten our journeys! Glad the clouds come and go my friend!!

Enjoyed..
Teresa

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on March 8, 2013

You are a real poet who is far from dead but has much to live for and write about. The poem speaks volumes and is a wonderful poem that many can relate too.

George

Reviewed by Barbara Henry

Reviewed on March 8, 2013

This is a powerful work,Budd, the subject matter as well as the honesty are refreshing. Continued success.
Barbara J Henry

Reviewed by Sandy Hoynacki (Reader)

Reviewed on March 8, 2013

Shakespeare has nothing on you Budd. Very well penned and totally understood. Impactful indeed...

Always,

Sandy

Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley

Reviewed on March 8, 2013

These words are not dead...
They are most explicit in meaning...
Days drudgery and pain can and will deter us from wishing
to express ourselves in how we wish when we must face the
burdensome task in living the way we do not wish to live ...

It will come in time my friend...

Hugs

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com

Reviewed on March 8, 2013

You've penned an impactful piece of lyrical sadness here, laden with regret that is so identifiable for many of us. Beautifully executed.