Soft tresses' haloing an angelic face
creamy delicate skin to be caressed. Intoxicating dazzling emerald eyes
with an impish beguiling so sweet smile.
But it's her inner self, of an angel's soul
with a delicate open loving heart.
That captured mine within seconds of meeting
thus purifying my whole entire world.
As she has allowed me the grace of sharing
this time, this space with her here in my life. So now the sun shines on during dour days
and moon beams play under ebony nights.
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Reviews of "Love's Lightening Strike"
Reviewed by Gert van Weenen (Reader)
Reviewed on April 5, 2013
Beautiful when you can hold on to someone in your dour days.
Someone who lifts you up and takes away the hard taste of bitterness.
Romeo's play of words spoken, stir hearts around the world to this want and need of moon beams and ebony nights. Grace being the incense of the one who knows these words and is moved to dance with Romeo and his moon beam into those ebony nights!
Lightning struck ...purified this mind!
Awesome write!
Teresa
I can see her radiance, both physical beauty and inside heart, emanating in this poem. Emerald eyes...she must be one hell of a heartbreaker. Lovely write!
There's paradox riffing through this lyrical wordsmithing of a love that might be here now, or perhaps is somewhere else. Either way, the words speak of the embrace respectful love nurtures, allowing forever memories and endless dreams throughout the quiet darkness of night.
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
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Someone who lifts you up and takes away the hard taste of bitterness.
Very well done Budd
Gerrit
Lightning struck ...purified this mind!
Awesome write!
Teresa
that speaks of beginnings!
Lesserowner Uvgreenize
Blessings,
Christine
Best wishes always
from
Kay
Anna
Lovestruck, gently enamored
and for the long road..
and the language to match
john
You composed this very well Budd.
Congratulations!
John Michael
in a wedding dress..
Lady Vivian
Well composed
Peace be with you
William
Dancing with Your
Sweet Sweet Muse
Moonspun Pearls
& Starry Dreams
Vickie
ChipB
Ron
Romantic and smooth as silk your poetry.
Beautiful the grace of sharing.
Lady Mary Ann
Love ya!
Jane
Poems. Thanks for sharing them.
Barbara J Henry
softly paint this page with of your muse...
who gives you days of peace in and during
those unfortunate days...
Love and Light
Lily