Just a playful thought I had, as I was driving through the West Virginia Panhandle today.
Happy Thanksgiving to all here
November 22, 2017
Blowing brisk November winds
sing through naked tendrils
While billowing darkened clouds
piled high alike these hills.
Played hide and seek with the sun
who cannot share his warmth
and furred dwellers rush and run
to hide their food at hearth.
Leaves whisp about in winds
now lost from those tendrils
and we see shapes in the clouds
as they race over hills.
All creatures wish for more sun
so they could feel its warmth
but now we hasten and run
for comfort at our hearth.
Winds singing through the tendrils
while clouds race over the hills
without the sun for our warmth
we run to feel our hearth.
the point of time is very nicely caught in this piece to show the reign of dominated Yin forces outside and a spark of the Yang within us. Cheers, alex
BRISK FALL, THAT BRINGS WINDY DAYS...ENCOURAGING THE WARM, SNUGGLED CLOSENESS OF OUR HEARTH. WORK DESCRIBING A BEAUTIFUL TIME OF YEAR...ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
The words you have chosen to express your thoughts are very vivid!
They create, for me, a beautiful picture of fall, my favorite season.
Thank you for sharing, and continued success!
Barbara J. Henry
Ahh, I am enjoying the feel of this poem! Like the way you say so much, so potently in so few words. Sure am glad you share your writings, friend. I'll be stopping in more.
When the brisk November winds arrive, the sun has to faithfully regress and winter wears her headdress. I enjoyed your poetry Budd, it's a great poem to read close to the hearth. With a nice glass of wine, and Nat King Cole crooning in my ear, sun would be forgiven. Thank you for the visit to my imagination, stay warm and close to hearth. Until spring peeks her lovely face and sun begins to dance again.
Budd....A great piece of writing....Some of our best writing ideas come when were sitting behind the steering wheel of our cars....
Have a Happy Thanksgiving, too....
Your thoughts play so graciously in the crisp air of autumn...
They create, for me, a beautiful picture of fall, my favorite season.
Thank you for sharing, and continued success!
Barbara J. Henry
Regis
I'm attempting to write a poem that is similar, but blogged down in its simplicity.
Ron
Have a Happy Thanksgiving, too....
I like this!!
never stop writing!
m