This poem strengthens my belief that focused persons need a shock once and a while - to show them that the world is round, and that there are others coming and going in our lives.
Surely Caroll gave him a second chance to get to know Carla. That's what I want to believe, anyhow. Good writing. _ Bill
Thank all of you for the wonderful comments. I laugh everytime I think about this scenario. I just wanted to explain that Andy Turner is from England and his comment really does mean something, although I'm not quite sure what. It's an "English thing."
hahahahaha...... poor George ! I found this very amusing, except the part about him being an 'inept' surgeon.... sheesh.... what was his last name again ? LOL. Great write !
Hello Janet! You are a very professional lady indeed and one to be admired. I loved this poem! Loved the flow and the humour. (It's a joke ME reviewing when I am just learning, isn't it?)
I like the look of your other titles and will definitely come back as soon as I have the time. This looks like a fun site for me.
Blessings Rev Davey
Early Works is an exhaustive compilation of the first decade of the poems and stories of Z.B.McClure. Included are family photos, rare personal photos, photos of 1st draft manuscripts of many of his early poems. Also some biography and memoir materia
Surely Caroll gave him a second chance to get to know Carla. That's what I want to believe, anyhow. Good writing. _ Bill
Well penned
William .....Peace
I once bought a match made in heaven. Sadly, it wouldn't light. No saltpeter and brimstone in heaven.
Ron
I like the look of your other titles and will definitely come back as soon as I have the time. This looks like a fun site for me.
Blessings Rev Davey