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Sleeping on the Surface
by Janet Brice Parker → (All Poetry by Janet Brice Parker)
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The folding together of her body
among pillows, sheets, blankets.
Like petals that close at night.

Dark sky looks down and sets the stage
for dormancy, unconsciousness
sinking into absence of surrounding
cosmos, earth, humanity, physical objects.

She sleeps on the surface and avoids
an invasion of deep sepia dreams.
Too tired to allow distant comfort, too afraid to face intrusion.

So she folds herself into a protective
form void of motion.
Aware of a dreamless sleep,
on the surface, safe from a malevolent
quagmire beneath.
   

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 Reviews of "Sleeping on the Surface"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 8, 2005
Some deep foreboding here. Well chosen words draw me into the mstery surrounding this lady of light sleep.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on January 5, 2005
Janet, this is really a splendid write which brings dreams and visions to the surface...in the following line...

The folding together of her body
among pillows, sheets, blankets.
Like petals that close at night.

I could not keep my mind from picturing the flowers that we call 4 Oclocks...yet these open at dusk...excellent write.

Allen

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2005
well crafted.

Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell
Reviewed on January 5, 2005
Surface sleeping = self-protection's ultimate "blanket"....well written piece Janet.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 5, 2005
powerfully written
love all kinds of dreams

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by Dave Harm
Reviewed on January 5, 2005
A different way of looking at something, I enjoy. Dreams! To be able to leave this world with all its realities and find peace in our own world. A world of our own making... This is beautiful and thought provoking

Dave

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on January 5, 2005
POWERFUL!! You have described this so well as an emotional state - and yet I can relate to it physically as well, having spent years prone to "unrefreshing sleep", owing to a chronic fatigue-type syndrome. The complexities of "wanting to block it all out" and yet also the not wanting to allow oneself comfort for fear of somehow being "caught out" is a torturous state of being. Like having to sleep on a precipice. Fascinating image you have brought to the surface here! Very well done. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 5, 2005
the fear of dreams or rather the fear of confronting dreams' emotional symbolism will leave one on the surface reality of deep unwanted thoughts and feelings ...

powerful and finely tuned poem ...

Reviewed by James Daniels
Reviewed on January 5, 2005
This was a very good poem to read, I enjoyed it, it was very deep and kept my attention throuhgout, keep up the great work and I look forward to reading more.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2005
Yes Eileen is right but sleeping on the surface while the dreams float by below. Wonderful.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 5, 2005
Janet this is an awesome piece! My favorite of yours, so far! You have captured what the medical world can't define. Stellar poem!
Love Eileen (did you get the info?)

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2005
What the ultimate escape clause, surface-sleep.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 5, 2005
If we could all just shut down and fold ourselves into such protective a blanket wouldn't it be so great/but alas it cannot be so for all...

Great expressive write Janet,

Felix


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