A different way of looking at something, I enjoy. Dreams! To be able to leave this world with all its realities and find peace in our own world. A world of our own making... This is beautiful and thought provoking
POWERFUL!! You have described this so well as an emotional state - and yet I can relate to it physically as well, having spent years prone to "unrefreshing sleep", owing to a chronic fatigue-type syndrome. The complexities of "wanting to block it all out" and yet also the not wanting to allow oneself comfort for fear of somehow being "caught out" is a torturous state of being. Like having to sleep on a precipice. Fascinating image you have brought to the surface here! Very well done. TY Kate xx
the fear of dreams or rather the fear of confronting dreams' emotional symbolism will leave one on the surface reality of deep unwanted thoughts and feelings ...
This was a very good poem to read, I enjoyed it, it was very deep and kept my attention throuhgout, keep up the great work and I look forward to reading more.
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2005
Yes Eileen is right but sleeping on the surface while the dreams float by below. Wonderful.
Janet this is an awesome piece! My favorite of yours, so far! You have captured what the medical world can't define. Stellar poem!
Love Eileen (did you get the info?)
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The folding together of her body
among pillows, sheets, blankets.
Like petals that close at night.
I could not keep my mind from picturing the flowers that we call 4 Oclocks...yet these open at dusk...excellent write.
Allen
love all kinds of dreams
Love & Peace
William
Dave
powerful and finely tuned poem ...
Love Eileen (did you get the info?)
Great expressive write Janet,
Felix