Chains (poem) by Janet Brice Parker on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

Emotively and meaningfully compelling, Janet. Thank you for sharing this powerful poetic creation. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

One of your best, Janet. I don't think I've ever seen a better penned poem of hurt and love.

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

wow the yearning in here to be released
is amazing!!! you have coined these desperate feelings well!!!
enjoyed this much!!

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

Kate is right, a stunning work.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

Startling, stunning, strikingly well-written, Janet: so lucid and devoid of decoration - you let the feelings and facts speak for themselves. The result is extremely powerful and, whether or not we have "been there" - you take us into this haunting realm of reality. I can only echo your prayer with a heartfelt Amen, and know that with God, all things are possible. There is maybe some kind of spiritual "root" that needs to be addressed, rather than it just be a cogniscent act of forgiveness and letting go. Doubtless you ask for wisdom and insight about such matters from those who can help you with this. Release can come instantaneously once we have found "the key". Bless you, love and prayers. Kate xx

Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

This is stunning in its impact on the emotions. I'm thinking the chains that bind you to this man, also bind him to you. It wouldn't surprise me in the least to learn you haunt him as much as he haunts you. Eighteen years is a long, long time.

*Chains*, beautifuly crafted, is a very strong piece in which I think everyone who reads it will be gut punched.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

The Chains of the heart are sometimes the hardest to break...This is an excellent piece on a very tough subject...well done

Allen

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

A very moving write.
A tough situation to be in.

Best wishes with breaking those chains.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

I understand the chains and wish for you peace with prayers. forgiving is easy, letting go is a lot harder.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

only when we confront our ghosts can we lay them to rest ... thought it isn't as easy as it sounds when it come to love & hatred ...

powerfully emotive and honest poem ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

A chilling invasive presence in this beautifully written poem!
Janet I went through some years of this after leaving an abusive husband. This may be just fine poetry on your part, but you do it
with knowledge. Very fine work!

etw

Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

Some of us are tortured by our past relationships forever I guess. It seems unfair that we should not be granted escape from the past in our dreams....instead it appears your past haunts you endlessly including in your sleep. A haunting write Janet. Very sad.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

I have been there and I think sometimes when we have a relationship whether based on lust or love and we are left behind we never truly get over it, wonderful way of putting it you have.

felix

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

This is is excellent poem about the nightmares or as the doctors say night terrors.

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

Wonderful poetry. Your talent shines again.

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

This is haunting..........
now I do understand your comment on my page

I believe when someone is very strong in your thoughts its because at that very moment they are thinking of you.......and your brain waves connect somehow........

this can be felt...your poem.

very clearely written
peace.........?
a

Reviewed by Dave Harm

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

Sad and powerful. My ex-wife, for many years had a power over me until I prayed for her. I gave that power to Someone with more Power. God Bless...