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Forgiveness
by Janet Brice Parker → (All Poetry by Janet Brice Parker)
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Hanging on devours me,
as if I were attached to a limb,
green and fresh,
with no possibility of breaking.
My heart and my hands
are calloused.

I imagine the limb snapping
on it’s own.
I am fearful of letting go,
deciding to release
and experience new ground.

Forgiveness will benefit my soul.
I know that, though I
remain hesitant.
The earth below looks
inviting and restorative.

Clutching the limb is
destroying me.
So I jump, and rest
on the cool sweet ground
of pardon.

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 Reviews of "Forgiveness"
Reviewed by Joyce Hale
Reviewed on May 27, 2005
Superlative, Janet!! I like it a lot!

Peace.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
Janet, it is good to see you once again, I love the way you describe this event, however, letting go can at times be the double edge of the sword. For in hanging on, we sometimes regain the strength that is needed to climb even higher towards heaven and therefore we reach a new and brighter spiritual plateau. I really liked this piece.

Allen

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
a well-penned description of forgiveness, Janet. hope you are well. Dawn

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
once we refrain from hanging on too long to our own perceptions we find ouselves relenquished, free and ultimately forgiven ...

Reviewed by Dave Harm
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
Oh, letting go, so much easier said then done... but so rewarding when achieved...

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
Pardon me, this is refreshing.

Ron

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
You know you have given me another good reason for forgiveness.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
Janet such a powerful courageous poem!
I love how you chose your dark and light
word tones, sort of like painting isn't it!;-)?

Great to see you back. Hope you continue to heal...

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
I love the "cool, sweet ground" of pardon idea. Well done.

Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
That's what forgiveness is all about.....letting go.....well done Janet!


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