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Dead End
by Jane Noponen Perinacci → (All Poetry by Jane Noponen Perinacci)
Sunday, August 21, 2016    Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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If you cheat, face the "heat". Inspired by a writing challenge titled, "Dead End" at Creative Writers Spotlight.


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He had to work late so he said
She fell asleep there on their bed
Next morning she woke up alone
No messages were on her phone

Around noon he walked in the door
"Rough night at work." strolled 'cross the floor
Placing a kiss upon her cheek
A strange perfume from him did reek

Next day she waited 'til he left
Feeling as she did so bereft
She made sure that he did not see
As she followed so secretly

Saw a female get in his car
She saw them kissing from afar
She smiled and went to the gun store
She bought a shiny forty four

Next morning she was not in bed
The note "Dead End" was there instead
He looked up seeing his dear bride
With gun in hand she shot he died

Jane Noponen Perinacci

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 Reviews of "Dead End"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on August 30, 2016
WOW! SHE DEFINITELY BROUGHT IT TO A DEAD END. I AM SO GLAD THAT I NEVER LOVED LIKE THAT. THOUGH THERE WERE TIMES I FELT LIKE I COULD KILL HIM, ESPECIALLY WHEN I FOUND A PAIR OF FEMALE UNDIES THAT WERE NOT MINE IN MY BED. I CAN LAUGH NOW BUT I SURE DIDN'T THEN, MY FOUL MOUTH TOOK OVER AND I WENT OFF. AH WELL, THIS WELL WRITTEN WORK BROUGHT BACK 'WONDERFUL'??? MEMORIES. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on August 24, 2016
Better yet, Ron, get rid of marriage all together!

Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 22, 2016
I can clearly see that this was written from experience. Go get him… Jane!

We are not monogamous (men perhaps a bit more than women). To insist on a monogamous relationship is one of those conundrums that religion has imposed on us and tends to get violated. When one seeks revenge for an act of unfaithfulness--a religious concept--adultery--by killing the person one desires to "own" by something called marriage, or for their lying, it is really excessive justice.

When are we going to get over all the guilt trips resulting in lying and start living better lives without the sword of religion constantly judging us?

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on August 21, 2016
Yes, another winner, in the dark noire style. I love it. It's dramatic and rings true somehow. Well done (yet again). John

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on August 21, 2016
She was deadly serious Jane. Finding two people who are truly and completely in love with each other is so rare. This sad story highlights that fact. Good poem and message.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 21, 2016
More marriages end with a shot to the head.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on August 21, 2016
Ahhh . . . You betcha he faced the "heat." Excellent write, dear Jane. Your writing Muse has been whispering good things in your ear lately, for sure.


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