A single teardrop descends/
silently/
rejoicing in the celebration/
of our liturgy/
as I ascend/
fervently/
into the nucleus of your beautiful ethos/
and become whole again/
one with you in brilliance & form/
we shine more radiantly than a million Suns/
weeping joyously as harmonious crescendos rise/
then fall/
& we follow in enraptured bliss/
acquiescently/
til the river crests/
then overflows her banks/
powerfully, ecstatically/
cooling/
the earth below/
and we swoon/
enervated/
& sated/
rejoicing in the celebration of our liturgy/
rejoicing in becoming/
we/
rejoicing magnificently
Whoa! Nice work. Got it all in there and with your mastery of the English language gave the reader knowledge of where you were going and what you were referring to when you got there. Great work. As always. As always.
A celebration of estatic love and happiness !
Where's my fan !!!
Lady Mary Ann
Beautifully written expression of how elated and in love you are with your special one!
Love and Light
Lily