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Unfinished Painting
by George J. Carroll → (All Poetry by George J. Carroll)
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Painting the atmosphere

Of my raw emotions,

On a canvas of my thoughts

That are not complete.

 

I must form the words

That will paint a feeling

That will leave the reader

Grasping the strength of meaning.

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Unfinished Painting"
Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on September 5, 2012
I believe you did that!

Deborah

Reviewed on September 4, 2012
All poetry and prose are a marvelous
painting from within our mind George
All our self-expression or
other inspired writes that yes leaves
the reader left to analyze

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on September 3, 2012
Consideration that all poets
thoughts of poetry being unfinished
perhaps keeps us writing *George*
as I look forward to Your next one!

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on September 3, 2012
Every painting is a poem, every poem a painting as Chinese thought has it. You are traveling in the realm of colorful words and well-written images, George!

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on September 3, 2012
simply wonderful George just the right words to express this thought
budd

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on September 3, 2012
I guess we all lean toward leaving our readers something for which to assemble and grasp, George. You're doing just fine.

Reviewed on September 3, 2012
fustration, yearning....you have a delicate pallette George with wisps of color here and there.!!!


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