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Brighten Your Day
by George J. Carroll → (All Poetry by George J. Carroll)
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Even the waters know their height

Though they ravage all in site.

Soon they deminish and are gone

Leaving behind a terrible sight.

 

Can we one day look back

And hope the good outweighs the lack.

For in our minds we create the good

If our actions show how we understood.

 

A smile outweighs a scowl

A friendly word a friend will make.

Look for the good and not dwell on the bad

Even the sad have known how to be glad.

 

So kick your troubles down the street;

Like a can when you were a kid.

There is much joy in a happy mind-

A peace that so many try to find.


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 Reviews of "Brighten Your Day"
Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on February 16, 2013
Such a fun poem *George*
just like "kick the can"

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on February 12, 2013
Such a pleasurable rhythm and message to this George!
Blessings,
Christine xx

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on February 12, 2013
So kick your troubles down the street;

Like a can when you were a kid.

There is much joy in a happy mind-

A peace that so many try to find.

That last verse is GOLDEN

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 12, 2013
Yes, indeed, dear George; life may well leave its flotsam and jetsam as a dismal trail in its wake but as long as we keep kicking that can down the street and focus with a good heart on what's ahead and try to make things better for those along our way, we can hope to undo the past's sorry legacy. I choose always to walk on the (wild!) and sunny side! :)) xx

Reviewed on February 12, 2013
I took your advice and kicked my troubles down the street. Like a can they made a lot of noise.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 12, 2013
You brighten my day by returning with a poem.

Ron

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on February 12, 2013
Good writing piece. These last four lines are wonderful, George. Great image, great inspiration for us. Thank you! ~~ Diana

Reviewed on February 12, 2013
Always look ahead...
"Even the waters know their height
Though they ravage all in site.
Soon they deminish and are gone"

There you have it in those first words...
It is up to us to look ahead and leave behind
the negative eh? :)

Wonderful prose George

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed on February 12, 2013
AMEM to "Brighten You Day"
I love "kick your troubles..."
everyday is another day to be
the day we want to have

Looking On The Bright-side Never
Blinded Anyone...
Vickie

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on February 12, 2013
a yes just kick like the cans we both kicked along as young..how easy and fun that was
budd

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on February 12, 2013
Wowwwww......sooo beautiful....loved it :) rhyme and rhythm wonderful
Best wishes, neerja


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