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Star of Paradise
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Monday, May 11, 2015 Rated "G" by the Author.

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Beloved You held me underwater indefinitely blue skies and dazzling outer space flooded my lungs, body, mind, and spirit this was no mere death nor ordinary passing but the birth of something far greater too vast to adequately describe There is a new constellation in the luminous heavens it spans the entire prism two starry lovers enshrined wedded in an eternal inseparable embrace

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Reviewed by Sonya Tomlinson

Reviewed on May 14, 2015

Hi Ron, Yes, this does sound scary being held under water indefinitely, but the inference is esoteric. There is a story where the Guru holds the disciple underwater and when the disciple starts gasping for air the Guru says this is how intense your love for God should be. In this poem I tried to describe my love for God beyond the desire for even air.
Blessings and spring blossoms
sonya ki

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on May 12, 2015

There's something about being "held me underwater indefinitely" that scares me, otherwise your poem is very uplifting and a harbinger of great love.

Ron

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