Great insight. Most of the atoms in the molecules of the gossamer filaments in the cocoon of your thinking were created by the explosion of stars. Their memory lingers in your poem.
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
Blessings
Sonya Ki
Ron