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The Let-Down
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This is how I felt the first time I realized God wasn't going to let me be a spoiled brat.


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I've already confessed to you all that I'm no Bible expert. Well, as you are about to discover, neither am I a poet. I do occasionally like to jot down my thoughts in rhyme, however, and I thought I'd share this one with you. Please rest assured, I'm not planning to quit my day job!

 The Let-Down

I learned long ago to not depend

On humans like me, whether foe or friend.

But I found a Promise I longed to believe,

About a Savior who would never leave.

I trusted God would not let me down.

 

And then the day that calamity came

I cried aloud to that Holy Name.

Face to the ground, floor bruising my knees,

Desperation tangled with faith in my pleas,

I begged my God not to let me down.

 

It seemed my prayers were never spoken,

And in the end, my heart was broken.

In spite of the promises from God's Word,

My impassioned cries had gone unheard.

I wept to admit, God had let me down.

 

 Years have past, I look behind

And I am humbled when I find

All things turned out much better than

If God had granted my own plan.

God had never really let me down at all.

 

“And we know that all things work together for good to those who love God, to those who are the called according to His purpose.” Romans 8:28 (NKJV)

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "The Let-Down"
Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on May 29, 2013
Elizabeth, just between me and you and all the poets and readers who check out Author's Den, I appreciate your writing. It's from the heart, and has authenticity, not preachy or super-pious. I'll bet you never say, "Dear Gawd," or anything close to that.
Thanks for blessing me!

Connie

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on January 31, 2013
Bravo!

Excellent piece of expressive poetry!

Don't quit you day job Liz! Not because of your poem is not good but because even the best poets can't seem to make ends meet.

I want to hear from you again in another poetic song.

May the Lord bless you with abundance and endless agape love,

John Michael

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on January 27, 2013
I can relate. A message well taken. Your scripture quote is hard to understand, or believe, at times, especially when the storms and sicknesses come and we seem to be praying to a brass heaven. Which i'm sure you can relate to. Thankyou for sharing. Peace to you ... richard

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 27, 2013
We are human and come from a long line of survivors. We are here because we overcame our fears and temptations, not because some god determined our fate.

Ron


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