Come all you bar room singers stop for a while and sing a song of being in love with a smile, sing about leaving all of the good life behind, sing about the real feelings still left so cold in her mind.
In candle light inside the room I speak to you of love in bloom my heart hears every word that is said as the wax drips down all feel the warm that surrounds every promise that I have made every path is filled with your laugh and it keeps me moving forward everyday
From sneaky Pete to French champagne we live inside the light again as I watch the flicker of the flame it is the lasting light of tears in ghost of moon fears I am still looking for the fun to play each tingle inky soul comes from you but you know how to always light my embers in the pale of night
A strum upon the stars and voices in the back seat of cars bring forth all we could and would be a share of life's wine and cuddles at the brink of time a vision few will ever see all I have been comes back around again and I play your song just for me
I travel in light to be a place inside your memory and it keeps the flames burning bright you hold my hand like I am new still you know the love is true and it keeps the passion so alive tremble in the feel of every thing that is real and the steal guitar sings us his song as inside the head of a memory instead we both just sing along
Three drunks like all the rest sit close and confess we love just to sing along I look deep in your eyes and make up pretty little lies still you want to sing along we keep the human beat of lovers out in the street how is that we could have gone so wrong
Tape begins to roll and the sway is soft and low as voices mingle into the special melody of all that we are playing the stars of every hope that came between you and me soft the harp and then the guitar it starts and harmony lifts us up to a place beyond our wildest dreams
Come all you bar room singers stop for a while and sing a song of being in love with a smile, sing about leaving all of the good life behind, sing about the real feelings still left so cold in her mind.
Quite a song you composed!!
Love Tinka
2- how can any poem live up to *that* title?
3- great poem
holds up well over its length -- long poems are often hard to sustain
good write
john+
Tell me you are mine...
Great thought=provoking poem!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)