Seeking form-holding peace like there gift it is
Fading in the glitter of still image on water
Parental midst of hope in love trashed
Candle burns bright on sill at midnight
Rails rattle as fate takes toil given
Father and mother pray caused
Late night sheets hold hope
Pillow neatly place firm
Window curtains blow
Open face of dream
Prayers said look
Day comes slow
Candle gone
Freedom
Won
Cry
So
I
I
So
Cry
Won
Freedom
Candle gone
Day comes slow
Prayers staid look
Open face of dream
Window curtains blow
Pillow neatly place firm
Late night sheets hold hope
Father and mother pray caused
Rails rattle as fate takes toil given
Candle burns bright on sill at midnight
Parental midst of hope in love trashed
Fading in the glitter of still image on water
Seeking form-holding peace like there gift it is
Is it gift there like peace holding form seeking
Water on image still of glitter the in fading
Trashed love in hope of midst parental
Midnight at sill on bright burns candle
Given toil takes fate as rattle rails
Caused pray mother and father
Hope holds sheets night late
Firm place neatly pillow
Blow curtains window
Dream of face open
Look said prayers
Slow comes day
Gone candle
Freedom
Won
Cry
I
I
Cry
Won
Freedom
Gone candle
Slow comes day
Look said prayers
Dream of face open
Blow curtains window
Firm place neatly pillow
Hope holds sheets late night
Caused pray mother and father
Given toil takes fate as rattle rails
Midnight at sill on bright burns candle
Trashed love in hope of midst parental
Water on image still of glitter the in fading
Is it gift there like peace holding form seeking
yes there are stages and you played that very well here in the wording andhow it is here the thought wideing and closing in like ones heart back and forth it is agony.....you got it coined here!!!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Love Tinka