~~~~~~~~~~~~~Sometimes, love is cool~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
You have drenched my soul in delight and expectation Bathed my life in desire and passion Washed my heart in joy and freedom
With you, I am like a giant child Able to play on the playgrounds of wonder To experiment with each swing, each slide, each merry‑go‑round That takes me to circular worlds of insight and discovery
I am a buffalo, roaming through the plains and fields of love Roaming free and wild on the hills and valleys of contentment Roaming with abandon, no restraint, no shackles Neither bars nor chains No tormentors
Only the rainbow of prism-ed light stretching before me Filled with undiscovered liberties and harbors of safety and peace All leading to a pot of golden you, my love, at the end of my every day
There is the hope that my arms/heart/soul Will be in/with/around yours My beautiful soul mate
Cool write, Pastor Eddie, but for a minute, I thought you were referring to that 13-pound baby boy that was born in Mexico! LOL He sure is a BIGGGGGGGGGG baby! WOW!
Love this write; thanks for sharing!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2004
yes love is cool. well done mr.t.
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2004
WOnderful poem, Eddie!
Reviewed by JEREMIAH JAMES (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2004
Beautiful, Eddie.
Excellent write.
Blessings,
Jeremy
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2004
Long may it last, E T....
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2004
You allowed us to see what a loving
and beautiful relationship is like Eddie..
love this..floria
Reviewed by Andrea Da Costa (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2004
So beautiful Eddie and I absolutely love the ending!
Wonderful write!
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Smiles,
cynth'ya lewis reed
Love this write; thanks for sharing!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Excellent write.
Blessings,
Jeremy
and beautiful relationship is like Eddie..
love this..floria
Wonderful write!
Andrea