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Lust Redux (from Brittany Renee's poem, Lust)

by Jeff Mason — Read all 207 poems by Jeff Mason

Inspired by Brittany Renee's poem, "Lust."

Monday, March 22, 2004



reality is my sole escape,
used to veil steamy sweat-soaked dreams;
nothing treads along my path
that's not an end without a means.

unbridled desire alights within,
as passion's fever breathes its rasp;
without -- only blush appears on skin,
as senses lose their feeble grasp.

shadow's cloak hides telling eyes,
while each mouth thirsts as it must;
thoughts evade the reasoned mind,
rushing like gale's fiercest gust.

besieged by starkest rebel thoughts,
in that gray, not right nor wrong;
unfulfilled, and longing now,
aching to complete love's song.

taunted and tormented minds
have needs that soon forbid themselves;
on hollow ground of mercy's cry,
beneath which fearless self now delves.

common sense now dead and blind,
fire surrounds our helpless souls;
searching through the haze, we find
ourselves entwined in destined roles;

our bodies writhe in deep desire
as spirits rise beyond the grave;
our pulses pound forever higher,
reaching for that thing we crave.

we now abandon all our fears,
drunk in spirit's sweet heady gin;
and as we soar, we gain release
until, with heat, we seethe again;

and in this place where two hearts meet,
our lesson's written there to learn;
we've felt the touch of pleasure's pain,
for which we will forever yearn.

Copyright Jeff Mason 2004


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Reviewed by Brittany Renée
Reviewed on March 31, 2004
I'm so proud of you :)

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on March 25, 2004
EXCELLENT work, Jeff! Pls check your message board

Reviewed by Cherry Pie (Reader)
Reviewed on March 24, 2004
Can you explain all this to little old me? Cherry

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2004
I agree with Joseph dear. lol

This is top of the class writing.......fine stuff Jeff....Ty, Dani

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2004
Jeff, this is outstanding (and from YOU I've come to expect outstanding)! There are so many wondrous images and subtle metaphors throughout -- this is great writing!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2004
Absolutely beautiful in essence,
rhyme and meter...great poem here Jeff...
floria

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2004
This is brillant Jeff.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 22, 2004
sometimes romantic passion is so good, it hurts ;)

your poetic skill excells in this poem ...

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 22, 2004
So beautiful Jeff so inspired you were.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 22, 2004
Excellent Jeff!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 22, 2004
Hey Jeff

wonderfully woen melody, seemed, loved how you were ble to carry the rhyme so beautifically, and the more than solid punch it delivered, ty Al

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 22, 2004
Well done !!!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 22, 2004
The cadence rocked, even without capitalization.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 22, 2004
Beautiful poem and rhyme that sets it apart.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 22, 2004
Jeff a superb depiction of the lust motif! The last verse is so right the yearn that never ends...


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