Lust Redux (from Brittany Renee's poem, Lust)
by Jeff Mason — Read all 207 poems by Jeff Mason
Inspired by Brittany Renee's poem, "Lust."
Monday, March 22, 2004
reality is my sole escape,
used to veil steamy sweat-soaked dreams;
nothing treads along my path
that's not an end without a means.
unbridled desire alights within,
as passion's fever breathes its rasp;
without -- only blush appears on skin,
as senses lose their feeble grasp.
shadow's cloak hides telling eyes,
while each mouth thirsts as it must;
thoughts evade the reasoned mind,
rushing like gale's fiercest gust.
besieged by starkest rebel thoughts,
in that gray, not right nor wrong;
unfulfilled, and longing now,
aching to complete love's song.
taunted and tormented minds
have needs that soon forbid themselves;
on hollow ground of mercy's cry,
beneath which fearless self now delves.
common sense now dead and blind,
fire surrounds our helpless souls;
searching through the haze, we find
ourselves entwined in destined roles;
our bodies writhe in deep desire
as spirits rise beyond the grave;
our pulses pound forever higher,
reaching for that thing we crave.
we now abandon all our fears,
drunk in spirit's sweet heady gin;
and as we soar, we gain release
until, with heat, we seethe again;
and in this place where two hearts meet,
our lesson's written there to learn;
we've felt the touch of pleasure's pain,
for which we will forever yearn.
Copyright Jeff Mason 2004
This is top of the class writing.......fine stuff Jeff....Ty, Dani
rhyme and meter...great poem here Jeff...
floria
your poetic skill excells in this poem ...
Love Tinka
wonderfully woen melody, seemed, loved how you were ble to carry the rhyme so beautifically, and the more than solid punch it delivered, ty Al