This is absolutely beautiful - your flow and rhyming schemes seem effortless. Very nice work.

Beautifully rich with an ancient mystique and a sensuous profoundness.

You are an amazing poet! This is classic!

his and her offerings blend so very well!!! almost sounds like one pen, thats brilliant writing on both parts, very romantic :) pax A

Be still my heart. Your verse on Lancelot and Gwy. puts mine to shame. It has risen to the top of my favorites. Best, Dawn

this is stunning poetry, jeff; it is NOT crap! i think it is beautiful and very well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :(

Nicely done indeed, Jeff. Thank you for this moving offering of emotive meaning. Love and peace. Regis

you have certainly risen to the occasion!

excellent poem!

Serenely romantic! A sense of solitutde and gothic purity rests in this poem. Absolutely beautiful. One of my favourites of yours!! Definitely. Brilliant piece, Jeff!! I'm proud of you.

Brittany

Jeff, this is most astounding poetry!
Such a gentle radiance, I really love this piece...
Beautiful lines, beautiful flow, excellently written!

Love, Sheila

really nice Jeff, and this form suites you well too, among others saying as well, the conversing between souls, nd the weighing back and forth just worked so wonderfully, just such good work, Al

Jeff.. Jeff.. Jeff! To those who would stick their noses in the air, declaring that poetry that rhymes has less depth, less glory, I say: READ THIS POEM! I was mesmerized by the rhyme and meter, captivated by the language of the masters, and brought to tears by the simple, gentle, quiet passion. One doesn't need to shout love to the skies.. far more power is in the heart of a telling such as this. Simply beautiful! katy xox.

This is a favourite on mine now…this is the sort of poetry I sit down and read when my time is my own…It is amazingly lucid, warm, and striking. Ty, Dani

That is so very beautiful.

Very good.. most excellent poetry Jeff!!

Love Tinka

well crafted..I love the flow and meter in
this piece Jeff....floria

sounds gwood to me Jeff. very crewative pwiece. enjoyed the read. G

One of your best. Flows beautifully

smooth write ... Jeff
an excellent piece

William

Absolutely and completely beautiful. The love is very moving in this piece. I enjoyed every word.

Cheers!
Deborah

Gentle Knight...
war is hell ....as both we know..
but luve....is beyond the ken of mortal man...

..rise again...in search of the grail...

Slainte..

Graham..

Exquisite rhyme that flows like a gentle
wave of passion,in beautiful verse...