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· Whispers in the Wake


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· On Mortality and The Butterfly Effect


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· a nation bonded beyond its differences

· pensive remembrance - Thomas Horton tribute

· i am (the brink of life you breathe)...

· needful things

· Etched in Hues

· loss of modality

· Soulspeak

· Catatonia

· Beringia

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Tower of Lights (by Trevor Mason)

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This is my 7-year-old son's (Trevor's) first poem, so go easy on him. :) He likes the fact that his dad is a poet.

Sunday, April 25, 2004




Tower of Lights
by Trevor Mason, 7 years old,
Dec 30,2003


A million lights

So high

In the sky --

Shine like the moon:

So bright;

So high.


Copyright (c) 2004 Jeff Mason for Trevor Mason


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Reviewed by Elizabeth Smith
Reviewed on June 5, 2004
Wow...and you say that he's 7? Amazing! Great job Trevor! I can see that you're a poet just like your Dad. I know that he must be so proud of you! God bless you!

Reviewed on April 27, 2004
That was lovely Trevor! An excellent poem!

Reindeer

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on April 26, 2004
Unique N Different!

TRASK PS: Glad You Care About Your Children!

Reviewed on April 26, 2004
(((jeff and trevor)))

i enjoyed trevor's first poem! i can see where he gets his talent from. :)

great job, trevor! may we see many more!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed on April 26, 2004
Trevor has your poetic genes in him; wonderful poem, Trevor, and Jeff, thanks for sharing your son's words with us here at the Den! YAY, Trevor..you GO, man! Wonderful poem!

(((HUGS))) to you, Jeff (and [[[HUGS]]] to you, too, Trevor!)!

Love, your Tx. friend, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on April 26, 2004
..hmmm.. a chip o' the ole block eh??..Trevor..this is great!! I enjoyed it and even showed it to my daughter..she kinda likes it as well..so there!!! YAY!!!

Vesna :)


Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on April 26, 2004
Trevor, you are going to follow in your Dad's footsteps and be a great poet someday. I enjoyed your poem very much. Write some more poetry soon.

Love, La Belle

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on April 26, 2004
Nice writing Trevor...you have it in you..I can see the flow and expression you have so well inherited from your talented father...

Debashish

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on April 26, 2004
Trevor is a very talented young man. Better run buy another computer Dad, I have the feeling you'll need one for yourself soon!
Great job Trevor! Lisa

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on April 26, 2004
Tell Trevor to keep it up! My son, Luke, wrote his first poem three years ago when he was 8. Yesterday, he told me he wanted to try to write more this summer - and publish. Yikes, competition...

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 25, 2004
not bad for a 7 year old ...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 25, 2004
Oh Jeff this is gorgeous....Beautiful poem Trevor!!

Love Auntie Tinka


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