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azuulu tsegoni rev 2 with Deborah Richards

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This is a collaboration with Deborah Richards. Her poem, azuulu tsegoni is so beautiful, it moved me to write a revised version. Make no mistake, her poem, as-is, was (and is) a beautiful gem - and that's why it so inspired me.

Tuesday, August 17, 2004



If you want to view the original poem,check it out here:
azuulu tsegoni
(original version)





in the distance, i have come and gone;

i have captured life's essence;

its glory,

its truth,

and its heart.

i have stumbled,
yet i have picked myself up.

i have seen life's belief,
in the eyes of me and mine.

i am but a simple man,
yet a noble man by heart.

in the distance, i have stood my ground,
and have been moved to action
for my cause;

fought for it's truth,

it's melody,

and it's wish;
which is mine.

my years have been long,
yet my tomorrows
grow ever shorter,
by time's confounding clock;
yet i have boldly smiled upon
ev'ry passing moment.

azuulu tsegoni: i am but a humble thought;

a fallow cry,

a subtle breeze of warmth;

myself... i am just a man,
reaching and striving
for a dream,

a hope,

a longing to be me.

in the distance, i have crossed
the oceans, lakes, and rivers;
and I have climbed the daunting hillside,
so that I might touch
the far-flung shining stars;

as my wish is simply this:
to hold fast
to the mem'ry of me...
the boy that i once was;

and to be humble,
and ever-grateful
for me...
the man that I am now;
the man that I have always strived to become.


Copyright (c) Jeff Mason and Deborah Richards


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Reviewed on September 4, 2004
(((jeff)))

WOW!!!!!!!!!!! that's all i can say...WOW! on my way to check out deborah's write--if it's anything like this one...WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on August 28, 2004
gem of a write....BHUWAN!!!

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on August 27, 2004
So deep and very personally touching. This is a wonderful collaboration. I'm so glad I stopped by for the read. Thank you.

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2004
Amazing write.
Makes us realize once more, that we only got this life, how soon it might be over.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2004
A truly beautiful and meaningful write.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 18, 2004
A series of wonderfully woven verses, Jeff. Great collaboration. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on August 17, 2004
Great Fantasy Write -- Good Memories Are What Help, To Be Greateful For What Little You Have Left After Losses Will Make You Become Humble Man!

But, In The End It Will Still Be Only Your Reputation That Counts!

TRASK

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 17, 2004
Fantastic write that the two of you have done together. Strong voice!

Reviewed on August 17, 2004
This poem, "azuulu tsegoni rev 2 with Deborah Richards" touches the wings of my memories, and speeds the flight of my reminiscences. It is fuel for the dreams' machine to run for a millennia.

I salute You, Sublime Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 17, 2004
Lovely write Jeff!!

Beautiful!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on August 17, 2004
This was so lovely! A beautiful and insightful poem, excellent!

Reindeer


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