Jeff...this is a beautiful song, and you know ME, I gravitate
toward song lyrics, so I chose this one rather than your new
one.
I would like to hear music to this, also, as this has hit material
status in it.
Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on September 6, 2004
My suggestion:
Pls add some music. Slow one. It will be even more pefect if you do so.
Excellent write.
I love your work, Jeff. Your subject is universal. I can read this and relate it to my own experience, yet I can see and feel your heart in it. You've gained much strength as a writer. Please keep it up!
You Can Die This MomentIn Just Blink Of Your Eye,i.e. Only You can Save Yourself!
PS: Think About How Many people Who Cared If You Die!
Credit For The Write!
TRASK
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on August 30, 2004
This has wrenched my heart out..to read this today of all days...my young cousin was killed in an accident last night..only 21..he was such a magnificent young man..only time? I wonder...
Touched to the core...
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toward song lyrics, so I chose this one rather than your new
one.
I would like to hear music to this, also, as this has hit material
status in it.
Pls add some music. Slow one. It will be even more pefect if you do so.
Excellent write.
Carmen :-)
loved it debbie
PS: Think About How Many people Who Cared If You Die!
Credit For The Write!
TRASK
Touched to the core...
Thankyou Jeff...
vesna :)
Why is it that the wrong always get together??
Life sucks bigtime!!
Love Tinka