Wow...so powerful, how much I loved that last line, this was excellent Jeff,

Reindeer

Jeff,

This poem left me awe struck! What a powerful write. Very deep and thought provoking! Thanks for this mesmerizing expression!

Cynthia

Thank you Jeff for your gracious comment on my post.

A soulful write that reminded me of Edgar A. Poe's work. I enjoy the journey we go on as readers, clearly a journey of spirit and meaning. Bravo!

~Rose~

Extremely emotional and deep composition that bares the soul to the Light .
The greatest love of all is to love oneself as a child of God , fully equipped and made in his image , what is for us ...will certainly not go by us...and the wonders and awe that God has in store for his children of trust...has still to fully unfold before our eyes...
Hold fast to the Light of God .. Jeff..

Peter

Very deep very touching emotional soul searching read Jeff!!

The moment I started to read this my own poem "Why ~ My Precious Friend " Echoed in my mind...not sure why but it did!!

Thanks for sharing this beautiful well grafted piece Jef!!

Love Tinka

masterfully crafted deeply expressive incantation of the wandering soul ...

much feeling here. Dawn

This is a very beautiful and touching write, Jeff. I enjoyed reading it very much.

Jeff this is very revealing of a deep felt loss and
one I can identify with...your last line shows much
wisdom and strength to go on knowing that we can't let
others be responsible for our actions, we must take that
upon ourselves. We are only defeated if we allow it!

jeff,

great write and thoughtful of the unknown,

debbie

All Dreams Unbelievable Or Otherwise Foretell Future,i.e. All You Gotta Do Is But Heed Or Follow Even Their Least Warnings Or Something Good Comes Too Pass__

Credit For The Write!

TRASK

A very serious poem that provokes deep thought. A very fine article wtitten by a thoughtful poet.

An outstanding well-penned thought-provoking composition, Poet! Excellent job. Thanks for sharing it.

A profound write Jeff, one worthy of reading several times.