How well captured from the 'other's' viewpoint! I can almost hear my husband talking to me! (grin) Thanks for sharing.
Monette

Your Beloved is very fortunate..does she know?


Vesna :)

You have conveyed so much feeling in so few words. Beautiful sentiment...Lovely poem.

Jeff, only a person with a heart, tender feelings, and the most discerning eye would consider stationing themselves, to do this, in patients, it also speaks of the warmth that must flow your heart, for others, a poem that eases it self into others, and also instructs, Al

Love is all! You've found yet another way to express it, Jeff. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Jeff--a lot said here. Few words and so much thought. Wonderful write.

sad but if you love someone
set them free....sting
enjoyed this very touching

sometimes the wait makes it all worth while ...

i like the flow, meter and voice in this poem ...

how touching. Beautiful work, Jeff.

well done...flow and rhythm is excellent...subject is one I can relate to.

Dear Jeff,

I'm in a poetic mood tonight and your poem inspired a quick verse I've recorded for you here. Not good enough to post but I hope a refreshing change to the normal review.

Blown as feathers
upon the air
To float aloft
but always there
Though free,
unfettered
that restless breeze
caresses leaves
on gentle trees
Never far
though out of sight
love never dims
It's ever bright...

Thank you for your inspiration. Your poem is beautiful!
Love Chanti

Much feeling in this one Jeff!!

Very touching my friend!!

Love Tionka

there are some things that must be free to wander,
some who are left to wait...Well done Jeff...

I knew a restless spirit and he broke my heart, but I learnt so much from him, in the time he allowed me to be part of his life. This poem made me think of him. I guess deep inside I still hope there is a future where he will be part of my life again. Thank you for this heart touching sharing of feelings.

The last line sums it up so well and I think that is beautiful.