Immaculate Emasculation
by Jeff Mason — Read all 207 poems by Jeff Mason
I know some women in this situation: contolled, with very little freedom or privacy; feeling powerless.
Wednesday, February 9, 2005
well and good,
and in among
the thickened wood,
he so thought he hung
the very moon;
and kept discov'ring;
excavating,
~~~~~~
plying layers,
finding faults
in every single thing
she did
~~~~~~
and he was fully culpable
but never truly accountable,
there;
glistening...
surface gloss,
~~~~~~
never listening
to all the loss
that we was causing;
~~~~~~
sheltered
by the shadow
of his own
enormous ego...
~~~~~~
with painted leaves that stuck
to his discerning palate;
pretense far beyond the reach
of any
stated common reason;
~~~~~~
regret belies the undercurrent
surging there
as if to speak of treason;
no, not ever satified
by any;
not even she in fullest season...
~~~~~~
logic undefined,
and her sweet ardor
shunned;
a countenance so deft;
refined
~~~~~~
captive...
never captivated by
his controlling
overbearing eye...
Copyright (c) 2005 Jeff Mason
I too know this one all to well my friend
ty, Dani
There is nothing more to add, you have said it all ! How sad that the ego destroys. Wonderfully captured Jeff, great wise write.
warm hugs
Elga
unbelieveable
coined to a tee!!!
and her sweet ardor
shunned;
a countenance so deft;
refined
....i hear ya..i hear ya...sooo familiar.alas...sigh
magnificent write..saved it!! TY!!
vesna :)
excellent poem!
etw
You may have saved many lives today through the power in your compassionate words. An excellent write--terrible what some women go through...I pray your friend sees the light.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Hope your friend sees the light, nobody needs to be controlled.
Lisa
Love Tinka
So I loved Judy's review.
John
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)