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· Whispers in the Wake


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· On Mortality and The Butterfly Effect


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· a nation bonded beyond its differences

· pensive remembrance - Thomas Horton tribute

· i am (the brink of life you breathe)...

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· Etched in Hues

· loss of modality

· Soulspeak

· Catatonia

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Before You Let Me Go (song?)

by Jeff Mason — Read all 207 poems by Jeff Mason

This came out more so as a song than a poem.

Sunday, February 19, 2006

Before you let me go...
I need to let you know...

I believe that you should think again...
Because I'm the one who's always been...

Right here for you...
The one to see you through...

I was there each time
you never knew...
just what it was
that you should do...

Still...

There I stood...

right beside you...

So...
Before you let me go...
I need to let you know...

I believe that you should think again...
Because I'm the one who let you in...
Over...
and over...
and over... again

And your silence now speaks loud and true
So much more
than a thousand words
could ever do...

And even when you didn't know
Exactly where your heart would go...
I cried with you...
And I tried with you;
And there were times I even lied for you...

And I always waited patiently
for the one thing in this life
that I knew I'd never get

A chance to finally call you mine,
Some way to leave the past behind...
But maybe it's not over yet...

So...

Before you let me go...
I need to let you know...

I believe that you should think again...
Because I'm the one who's always been...

Right here for you...
The one to see you through...

I was there each time
you never knew...
just what it was
that you should do...

Still...

There I stood...

right beside you...

So...
Before you let me go...
I need to let you know...

I believe that you should think again...
Because I'm the one who let you in...
Over...
and over...
and over... again

And your silence now speaks loud and true
So much more
than a thousand words
could ever do...


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Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on February 8, 2015
I wonder if you have put these to song yet? They are certainly inspired and catchy and oh what potential for growth these painful experiences contain! Blessings, Christine

Reviewed by Jennifer Christian
Reviewed on June 8, 2008
This poem speaks from the heart so clearly, and I think it would make a lovely song. Who do you think would lend the tune?

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 24, 2007
A good portrait of a love beginning to feel used. Silence can reveal much more then most people think. Lady J

Reviewed on September 2, 2006
You FEEL love so DEEPLY, I feel the longing and knowing in your voice. This song shall live on Jeff!!! This is GREAT! and totally utterly Amazing! Your words and feelings run deep as the deepest ocean! HuGs! *She*

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on June 30, 2006
Perfect lyrics that say it all! Doesn't get any better than this! Bravo, Jeff! I'd sincerely love to hear the music you add.

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Reviewed on June 4, 2006
There's just so much longing here...He gives so much, all he has, but it's just not enough...The echo of repetition comes like tears of unrequited love and frustration to the point of almost begging...alas, to the sadness and emptiness of deaf ears.
"And your silence now speaks loud and true...So much more than a thousand words could ever do..." as if painfully taken from my consciousness.
I'm imagining the music...
Taylor

Reviewed on April 28, 2006
in my view we never really see her only you always standing beside
her. I guess the simplicity of the lyrical structure despite it's charm doesn't allow for that, but I hope it woos who it was intended for. saludos

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on April 21, 2006
Silence can be painful. Fantastic write that I am sure will touch her if there is a chance.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on March 21, 2006
Love it! damn you're good Jeff..talent galore!! Bravo!



vesna:)

Reviewed by Only A Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on February 22, 2006
a very real and touching song, best wishes for its publication.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on February 21, 2006
Ditto...love it.

Reviewed on February 19, 2006
It would indeed make a wonderful song,
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 19, 2006
This is really a very deep touching song....a demo please!!

Would love to hear it too!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 19, 2006
Beautiful lyrics Jeff, and I'd love to hear it as a song.

Eileen


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